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PostSubject: Vendetta #86 Grades!   Vendetta #86 Grades! EmptySun Jul 27, 2014 4:27 am

MATCH 1 | Singles Match
Crystov Razetti vs. Harvey Jordan

Crystov Razetti no showed, so therefore the winner of this match, and picking up his debut win with the Figure Four Leg Lock is Harvey Jordan! Harvey, if you would like some feedback, feel free to contact any member of the team. Thanks for showing!


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PostSubject: Re: Vendetta #86 Grades!   Vendetta #86 Grades! EmptySun Jul 27, 2014 4:32 am

MATCH 2 | Triple Threat Match
Xtreme Icon vs. Bryan Knox vs. Cletus the Lumberjack

This one ended in confusion. Bryan Knox was retired before the deadline, and Icon didn't know whether the match would count. Then, Cletus the Lumberjack no showed, on the basis that Knox was gone. To clear this up, if this happens again in future, just write the character that has gone into the match. It doesn't feel right to pass a verdict on the match, since Cletus didn't post based on the fact that Knox was gone, and it was hours from the deadline that he got his answer.

Because of how the match fell into disarray, I'm going to null this match. However, if Icon would still like feedback, please feel free to contact one of the team.
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PostSubject: Re: Vendetta #86 Grades!   Vendetta #86 Grades! EmptySun Jul 27, 2014 4:33 am

MATCH 3 | Singles Match
Danny Diamond vs. James Carlisle
Grader: Kani

Alrightey, we have two short matches here, so let's get started with Danny Diamond.

Danny Diamond: Short match, with some good strategy from Danny, so it didn't feel like a throwaway. Even though you felt demotivated, it was good to see a short match that wasn't *finisher, pin*. If we were playing EWR, I'd say that this was perfectly acceptable wrestling. I can't remember which one said that. Scott Keith, maybe? Anyway, it was short, but fine. So, yay!

James Carlisle: Very quick short match here. I feel like you put the action in, but kind of suffered as far as description is concerned. Obviously, this is a match that was just posted to show, which I still appreciate. I'd prefer full matches, but I'd much rather have a short match than a no show. I felt that this was just a little too quick, falling into "this happened, this happened, this happened" kind of territory. Though you did have some good action in there.

Verdict: Not much to go by on both accounts, but I'm going to give it to Danny Diamond. I felt your match was more polished and read better than Carlisle's. And that's that. Thanks for showing, guys.


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PostSubject: Re: Vendetta #86 Grades!   Vendetta #86 Grades! EmptySun Jul 27, 2014 4:35 am

MATCH 4 | Singles Match
Rob Chapman vs. LJ Summers

LJ Summers has no showed this match, so your winner via count out is Rob Chapman! Rob, if you would like to have some feedback, feel free to get in touch.


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PostSubject: Re: Vendetta #86 Grades!   Vendetta #86 Grades! EmptySun Jul 27, 2014 4:37 am

MATCH 5 | Singles Match
Spyro vs. Akira Kobayashi

Unfortunately, Meth had to no show due to a family crisis. So, your winner by submission is Akira Kobayashi! If you'd like some feedback, don't hesitate to get in touch. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Vendetta #86 Grades!   Vendetta #86 Grades! EmptySun Jul 27, 2014 4:41 am

MATCH 6 | Xtreme Rules Match
C5 Ion vs. Tyson Smith

Ion has taken a break and Tyson Smith no showed. I don't know what the story is with Tyson, as he was online recently, but this will be his second no show in a row. Tyson, if you could PM me and let me know if you're planning to show at the PPV, that'd be much appreciated. Hope everything is alright.

This match never happened. You didn't see anything. It's all part of your imagination.
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PostSubject: Re: Vendetta #86 Grades!   Vendetta #86 Grades! EmptySun Jul 27, 2014 4:43 am

MATCH 7 | Intercontinental Championship Match Qualifier
The Pirate vs. Greg Samuel

Greg no showed this match, so your winner, and the man who will occupy the final spot in the triple threat match for the Intercontinental Championship at Rev Wars is The Pirate! If you'd like feedback, you know the drill. Good luck in the championship match!
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PostSubject: Re: Vendetta #86 Grades!   Vendetta #86 Grades! EmptySun Jul 27, 2014 4:44 am

MAIN EVENT | Tag Team Match
Robert Hope and Hitman Alex vs. D-Volution (DC Hennig and David Michaels)
Grader: Snoopz

Ropert Hope & Hitman Alex: Good intro to the match, showing the tensions and I liked that DC out-wrestled Hope early on. The descriptions are great to start off and the match is building nicely with you utilizing the characters very well. BIG BLOCK OF TEXT! Not really a problem with that, but I'd try to avoid having some paragraphs that are the entire size of the page. Won't take any points off for it, because that'd be silly, but I feel it's worth mentioning. The action throughout this post was good. I feel like Mick started the match and iLike finished, because I think I can start to see where the descriptive ability goes down. It doesn't really get bad, but it just isn't as good as the first big portion of the match and Kani is amazing at descriptions. A good ending to the match, though. A cheap way for Alex and Hope to get the win, while keeping D-Volution looking strong. All-in-all, a good effort.

D-Volution: Great descriptions throughout the entire post by you guys, as well as great action. Not as long of a post as your opponents, but I grade on quality and not quantity, and you guys' post was also a good length. Great tag team psychology in the match. Classic stuff like David trying to get the tag, but Hope and Alex preventing it for a while until he can finally tag DC in and get the big hot tag. There's not really anything I can criticize about this match. It's very good, as I would expect from a team like Chilly and Mick.

Verdict: Both posts were really good, but I can only choose one (well, technically two) winner. I'm gonna give it to D-Volution, however. I felt both teams were very close in terms of action and psychology, both teams used the characters very well, so my main decider here was the descriptive ability, which went to D-Volution because, while not bad, it did begin to lack a bit in the later portion of Hope & Alex's match. I apologize for this being a relatively bad grading, as I'm a bit busy right now, but if you have any complaints about it or questions, feel free to PM me.
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PostSubject: Re: Vendetta #86 Grades!   Vendetta #86 Grades! EmptySun Jul 27, 2014 5:02 am

Closing note:
It would appear that Summer is taking it's toll. I'd like to thank everyone who showed, on behalf of the GM team. We really appreciate your dedication, and we hope to see a decent showing through the Summer. Thank you again, guys.
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