| | Eeyen TeamMoose
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| Subject: Vendetta 75 Grades Sun Apr 06, 2014 12:58 am | |
| MATCH 1 | Singles Dereck Walter vs. Axle Aomori Grader: None
Both men no-showed. Dereck won't be back for a while, according to his brother.
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| | | Eeyen TeamMoose
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| Subject: Re: Vendetta 75 Grades Sun Apr 06, 2014 12:58 am | |
| MATCH 2 | Singles Candy Kane vs. Rogue Grader: None Rogue was kicked out of the fed and Razor no-showed. |
| | | Eeyen TeamMoose
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| Subject: Re: Vendetta 75 Grades Sun Apr 06, 2014 12:59 am | |
| MATCH 3 | Triple Threat Mark Frenzy vs. Ellis Morgan vs. RJJR Grader: Snoopz This is gonna be a short grading, since I can't really do much with what you guys wrote. Ellis, I'm sure I don't need to tell you that writing your post as one relatively large paragraph isn't a good thing. You were likely busy and did the best you could in the time you could. If that's not the case, then, well, you need to space out your posts more and make it longer in the future. Quality > Quantity, but when you write an entire match that short, it's not gonna have much quality. Your descriptions could also use some work. Mark, your post was even smaller than Ellis', although it was at least spaced out. I'd suggest writing longer paragraphs and adding more detail to your post, as your descriptions could also use some work. RJJR, you had the longest post of the match and even yours was pretty short. My post this week was short, but I knew my opponent would no-show. All three of you posted and you all had small posts. If you wanna impress here in XWA, you need to put in more effort. Not to say your posts were all bad, because they weren't. They just didn't have enough quantity to really be that good either. All three of you need to work on your descriptions, too. Read matches from some of the main event players to get a feel of what really good description is like. RJJR is winning this one. His post was the most entertaining of the three. It actually had some length to it, not a lot, but a good amount more than the opponents. Like I said before, quality > quantity, but you need some quantity to have good quality.
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| | | Eeyen TeamMoose
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| Subject: Re: Vendetta 75 Grades Sun Apr 06, 2014 1:00 am | |
| MATCH 4 | Tag Team Pyro and Raye vs. Claudio and Diveraz Grader: None Pyro and Raye no-showed. Not sure I've seen either one of them since the PPV. |
| | | Eeyen TeamMoose
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| Subject: Re: Vendetta 75 Grades Sun Apr 06, 2014 1:00 am | |
| MATCH 5 | Singles Robbie Reyes vs. Jared Jerusalem Grader: Razor Verdict: This was actually a very very close match, much to my surprise. Jared, I've been reading your matches lately and as good as you are, I didn't think you'd be able to manage someone of Mike's caliber. Not because you're not good or anything, but because Mike is a reaaaally good e-fedder. That said, I thoroughly enjoyed your match. I really liked the triangle choke counter into the walls of Jerusalem. Your ending was unique as well, though I wouldn't expect that kind of ending for a lower-card match. Mike, your match was very well done. I enjoyed reading it and your character portrayal was very perfect. Your match had no real errors, however I did feel it ended a bit too quick. It seemed like it was building up into something good but it just kinda, ended. Don't get me wrong, I will NEVER grade based on length, and your match wasn't that short, but I just feel it could've been built into something much better. The match itself was good, it just ended too abruptly to tell much of a story. Jared's wasn't super long or anything, but it was the right length for a match this short. This wasn't based off length alone, don't get me wrong, as I won't ever do that, but in overall terms, I feel more comfortable giving this one to Jared Jerusalem. Also, on a side note, you guys could both use a bit of work in spacing. Mike's paragraphs could have been spaced a little more and Jared's a little less. Jared, you don't need 10 lines for every pinfall lol. Nonetheless, spacing is irrelevant when it comes to grading, just a side note. Decent work for both of you but I feel you could've both done a little better.
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| | | Eeyen TeamMoose
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| Subject: Re: Vendetta 75 Grades Sun Apr 06, 2014 1:01 am | |
| MATCH 6 | Singles C5 Ion vs. Johnny Devine Grader: None C5 Ion wins via no-show. |
| | | Eeyen TeamMoose
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| Subject: Re: Vendetta 75 Grades Sun Apr 06, 2014 1:02 am | |
| MATCH 7 | Singles Robert Hope vs. Riley Williamson Grader: None Riley Williamson no-showed. He was moving and had internet issues. |
| | | Eeyen TeamMoose
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| Subject: Re: Vendetta 75 Grades Sun Apr 06, 2014 1:02 am | |
| MATCH 8 | Singles Candice Love vs. Wolverina Grader: None Was a scripted match. Congrats to Candice Love. |
| | | Eeyen TeamMoose
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| Subject: Re: Vendetta 75 Grades Sun Apr 06, 2014 1:02 am | |
| MAIN EVENT | XWA World Heavyweight Championship | Tables Match Hitman Alex vs. Maddox Paine Grader: Ian
Match is null and void as neither person got their match in by the deadline. We'll work it into the canon and iLike will get another title shot at some point as the deadline became a cluster fuck by the end.
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| | | Eeyen TeamMoose
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| Subject: Re: Vendetta 75 Grades Mon Apr 07, 2014 1:21 am | |
| If I end up having to grade that match because Razor and iLike are both cunts I'm going to be very, very pissed. I have no time to grade things. It's 1:30AM and I have to be up at 8. I also have homework I have to do on top of making the next card and all the threads that go with it... |
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