Ellis Morgan: You no-showed. For shame! I believe that means you're out of the fed now, but I'm not certain on that.

Azrael: Your descriptions are alright. They could use some work though, to be honest. I'd suggest reading some word from Robert Hope/Kani to get an idea of what to go for as far as descriptions go, as I feel he's probably the best in the fed when it comes to that. Your action was quite good, however. The Double Underhook DDT/Spear combo was actually brilliant. So, this is a good post. Like I said, read some of Robert Hope's descriptions to get a feel for what you should go for there and you'll be golden.

T.K.: As for your description, it's quite good. About what I've come to expect from you, honestly. The mocking from Azrael was well done. Your action was also quite good. Not much else to really say about this match. It was all pretty good. Not amazing, considering how your standard usually is, but good.

Verdict: This is surprisingly close. Azrael definitely needs to work on his descriptions, but I felt he just slightly edged Ruro with his action. That said, I have to give it to T.K. His post was just better in pretty much every other aspect and his action wasn't too far behind Azrael's.

Fuse-Boy: Oh God, CRUNCHER!!! on commentary. Beautiful. There's not really much I can say about this post, as you didn't do a whole lot. I'm just happy you actually showed up, considering you're leaving the fed. That's more than most would do.

Marquis Carter: Much-like Fuse's post, there's not much I can say about this. You know you rushed it and you know it's not very good. The Marquis insult to CRUNCHER!!! was a tad lame, to be honest, but I like that you're using him like that.

Verdict: Obviously, this wasn't a good match. Fuse left the fed and he couldn't get the ball going, so I don't blame him for the bad post. Abdel probably saw Fuse's post and didn't feel the need to write anything great either, so I don't blame him as well. I have to give it to Fuse-Boy, though. Abdel had better description, but Fuse's action and finish were definitely better.

Verdict: This was actually a lot closer than I thought it would be considering what Jenny told me recently. I realize you are going through a lot right now, Jen, so it's completely understandable that this wasn't your best work by far, but you actually still did a fine job. Effy, your match was good as well. You both were about even in entertainment, however Effy had some more spots and storytelling on both ends. Effy, your writing could use a lot of work, though - most specifically, your description. A lot of times I saw you write things like "She hits a move, then she hits this move, etc. etc." try to go a little more into detail with that. Spot-wise, you still took it by a bit. Jenny, it is completely understandable that this wasn't your best work, but this was also a lot better than you thought it was. Nonetheless, aside from those few errors, Effy's match was also good and I am giving it to her.

Verdict: I'm not going to be too hard on you Rellim, since I know you didn't put much effort into this match due to the whole "I dont know if he's showing or not" thing, but reading your match, I automatically assumed you were gonna lose. The match itself wasn't awful, it just wasn't very good. However, when I read Ion's match, I may have had a change of heart. Ok, Ion, your match wasn't bad, however you reaaaally need to take the advice that's been given to you before. Your description is very very lackluster. I would highly recommend reading one of the main event matches if you hope to improve. Your aesthetics were pleasing, reading the match itself was an easy thing to do, however, the description was very lacking and your storytelling was moderate. This doesnt come down to "who had the better match" but more to "who had the less-bad match" and in this case, it's Nightmare by a smidge. Due to both of your matches being very lackluster, I had to get a little picky. Aside from the whole "Nightmare scares the ref" thing, I didnt see too much character development in Ion's match, whereas Nightmare's had a little more. I enjoyed the ending, not used to a countout ending, however I would have liked Nightmare to debut in a more dominant sense, especially since he's a big dude and his gimmick would have me think he is dominant. Remember, respect isn't a category anymore. If you can put on a good match, you can still have your character dominate most of it. It comes down to storytelling, really. Nonetheless, I enjoyed your countout ending as well as the (very rushed) use of the tarantula. Both of you can do MUCH MUCH better. Ion, please read some of the main event matches, Rellim, I've seen you do much better so I assume you're just rusty and you did say you didn't try as much in this match.

Nova: Now you know why I have Riley call her out on Twitter about the Clothing she wears. I loved how in the beginning you had some Technical wrestling going on. "Nova and Skye lock up a Collar and Elbow tie up then Skye reverses the move or counter it into her twisting Nova's arm around to her back."-Just a quick Description of what you did. I loved the Commentary going on between Ted and Joey. as Miles just came back from taking a Shi-crap as you say. Nice touch XDAnd I saw that Shot you took at a certain Individual. Not naming names, But you get the drift. "Skye, already being half way back to her feet, is kicked in the gut and her head placed in between Nova's legs. Nova then pops her hips and lifts her up, looking for her Nova Bomb! However, just as she is about to nail the move, Skye reverses it in mid-air into a lovely Hurricanrana!" -I loved how you had Nova set up her Finisher, but to any get it countered. The Finish was something unexpected, but it was written well. Good Job as usual, Chilly.

Skye Sapphire: I thought you did a Good Job on using Nova's Strength against Skye since Nova is abit bigger in terms of both Height and Weight. Right off from the start you had Nova and Skye lock up in a Tie-Up before Nova using her pure strength to her advantage as she applied the Side Headlock. And then after the series of Clothesline to follow after. I could Imagine or visualize that Nova is kind of like Chyna here as she is just about with the Body build and muscle. The Series after Elbow Shots after Sky getting denied from the Two count was a nice touch. She trying to keep this Big and tough lady down, which is the name of the game here for her. I feel like I'm missing the Reference here as Joey argues with Mikoto after Mikoto throws the Soda to Joey's head. -Is that Joey's ex-girlfriend? The ending of your match was also written very well, and I thought was pretty cool. Good Work Snoopz.

Verdict: Although both did write up a short match, I thought that both posts were equally Entertaining and Fun to read. Both did a good job on making this sound like a Divas match. In the end, for me, this was hard to grade as they both did an excellent job. This was a close call but I believe, Nova did better and had the better overall match.

Transocles: I'm assuming this means you're leaving the fed because I disagreed with your argument to throw out Snoopz match last week. There are always going to be things you don't like and we were both faced with them recently. I thought you writing a trans-character for the fun of it was awful and I thought you writing about sexual assault was borderline criminal. I let you stick around so I could learn the facts and give you the chance I thought you deserved, despite the criticism and scrutiny I faced for it. I took A LOT of heat in the name of giving you every chance I could. You, on the other hand, decided, that because you didn't get your way, (Even though it was clearly your own fault) to quit. Whatever. Have fun wherever you're going to be. Hopefully you calm the fuck down and stop creating drama.

Spyro: I actually really enjoyed the character building here despite the fact you obviously were fucking around. Thanks for bothering to post something that helps canon.

Verdict: Obviously Spyro wins.

Drake Dysfunction has won via no-show.

Danny Diamond wins in canon... Click here for more.

I think this was supposed to be a promo match. I'm not entirely sure. Alexis Rose wins via no-show.

Riley: Like I've warned you in the past, the fluff is getting to be an issue with you. Sentences like "The fans can't believe it, some gasps and perplexed reactions illustrating this point in particular" aren't entirely helpful and are there to make the match appear longer. Telling the reader about the fans reaction is important and a good thing to do, but writing a supporting narrative to attach to it is not. "The Last Man Standing match as you cannot be counted while outside the Ring." -- You can't? I-DThat is news to me. Never seen that rule anywhere. There's a lot I liked about your match. The build up was solid, the description was sporadically really good but never dropped below a certain level of quality. There were things I really didn't like, though. Characterization was poor. You did an OK job on Shade but a poor job, in my opinion, on Riley Williamson. The run down from Jared was out of left field. Why would he come down? You're a babyface... You don't need help in 1-1 matches... That's really not good. Then, there was the matter of you incorrectly stating that there was a rule about counts only being good in the ring. Also not good. So you made your character look poor, in my opinion, with the run down, you incorrectly wrote the stipulation, and your hardcore spots were lackluster compared to recent memory.

Shade: It was an odd start, but I like it. Shade hitting him with the bell is a trending moment to kick off a main event. There definitely were a lot of spots and you wrote the stipulation really well.. as well as the Hardcore title aspect because that was once again, fucking brutal. Shade refusing to let the referee fast count a man that might be burning to death is possibly the best spot I've ever seen written that could actually happen... Only it couldn't have possibly happened unless Riley was in special gear to withstand the heat (and protect from the glass) There is a lot I like about your match, but there's a lot I didn't like. I thought your description was lacking, I thought the action was rushed, and I thought the finish, while nice in theory, was poorly thought out.

Verdict: There were huge flaws in both of your matches. I think had Myke thought out his finish and put a little more emphasis in the build-up, he could have taken this one, as it was an incredibly unspectacular effort from Riley. However, I'm going with Riley Williamson. The biggest issue I had with either match was that Shade's finish just couldn't happen without precautions being taken that he didn't bother to write out. Riley's match had better overall action and a better finish, while Myke certainly wrote the stipulation and the spots better. It was close, but Riley narrowly edges this one out.