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PostSubject: Vendetta #109 Grades   Vendetta #109 Grades EmptyTue Apr 21, 2015 4:01 am

PA3 vs Xtreme Icon
No DQ Match | IC Title Tournament
GRADER: Decepitos


PA3: You need to work on your description and selling. I feel like I'm reading a play by play tbh. Don't just say what's happening. Show it. I've graded a match of yours before and really I see no difference. It's still lacking in that department. The action is good, but it's affected by the lack of those two important aspects. Also, there are no rope breaks. It's no DQ Funny

Xtreme Icon: Your whole match was alright, but you can still improve in all aspects tbh. I know you were working late and couldn't write more, and that's alright.

Verdict: Xtreme Icon takes this one. While he this isn't his best match, he beat PA3 in description and selling. PA3's only strong point was in his characterization and action, but again the action was hindered by the lack of description. Dont be discouraged Maestro, you should really read other matches and try to use them to improve on your writing. Grats Icon, and good luck in the finals.

James Best vs E.G. Deal
No DQ Match | IC Title Tournament
GRADER: None


James wins by no show

Minkaro vs Dante Cross
No DQ Match
GRADER: Definitely Not Decepitos


Minkaro: Good description and selling, but inconsistent. Your action is great but it's way too one-sided, and overall the match feels unfinished. Though you did mention a lack of motivation, so I understand. Not your best work, considering I graded your match at Redemption and it's really good.

Dante: Also nice description and selling, a bit more consistent than Mink but still needs a bit improvement. Your action was really good tbh, that broken kendo stick splinters to the back thing was awesome! It could have benefited from being described better, though. I also liked that you were able to not make it one-sided considering the length of your post  A good match, but it could be better.

Verdict: Dante Cross takes this. His post was pretty much a more enjoyable read, and the consistency of his description and selling takes this. I think Mink was expecting this due to his note at the bottom of his post, and it really just wasn't his best. Grats Dante and good luck on the finals!

Razor Xtreme vs Michael Astin
Steel Cage Match
GRADER: None


Razor wins by no show

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Note: I accidentally deleted the original grading thread (worst gm ever). The grading for Xtreme Icon vs PA3 is  summarized, I had much longer feedback for PA3 but hell I wasn't typing all that again <_< If you guys want in depth feedback, pm me.


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PostSubject: Re: Vendetta #109 Grades   Vendetta #109 Grades EmptyTue Apr 21, 2015 4:03 am

Opening match threads in case anyone will write an ending (haha like that would ever happen)
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