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PostSubject: Vendetta #110 Grades   Vendetta #110 Grades EmptyTue Apr 28, 2015 9:57 am

PA3 vs. Dante Cross
Singles Match
GRADER: None


PA3 has left the fed, Dante wins by no show.

Ryan Quill vs. Xtreme Icon
Singles Match
GRADER: None


Icon wins by no show.

James Best vs Michael Astin
Singles Match
GRADER: None


Promo Match.

Matthew Bradley vs Razor Xtreme
Singles Match
GRADER: Broski


Interesting match up all round.

Matthew Bradley
-Interesting post man, it was quite the read. Story telling was well paced out and the action was quite good too. Not much wrong I could say here, because overall it was a good post.

Razor Xtreme
-Good job continuing from the post, posted by Matthew Bradley. Your use of action was good and your match was pretty good. Again nothing much I can say here as your post was good too.

Result
-Overall it was a good read, and I'm glad you two showed up and posted. Thank you guys for that. I feel that it's gonna be a hard choice to decide who won, as both posts were quite even. So I'm going to select the one I enjoyed reading most. And that was Matthew Bradley. Great job guys! Good luck at whatever we got you booked in at the PPV


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PostSubject: Re: Vendetta #110 Grades   Vendetta #110 Grades EmptyWed Apr 29, 2015 8:58 am

Gradings are out.

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PostSubject: Re: Vendetta #110 Grades   Vendetta #110 Grades EmptyWed Apr 29, 2015 1:38 pm

I was convinced razor had that won, his post was very quick considering the circumstances and a great post. But I'm happy; I have a feeling that this won't be the last time we write against each other and I look forward x
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PostSubject: Re: Vendetta #110 Grades   Vendetta #110 Grades EmptyWed Apr 29, 2015 1:56 pm

Razor talking shit about beating me yet gets his ass handed to him by some random dude. Come on now :shaq:
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PostSubject: Re: Vendetta #110 Grades   Vendetta #110 Grades EmptyWed Apr 29, 2015 2:28 pm

I accept the loss, but that was a horrible grading. Why couldn't Myke or Snoopz grade?

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PostSubject: Re: Vendetta #110 Grades   Vendetta #110 Grades EmptyWed Apr 29, 2015 2:33 pm

Could've used some constructive criticism really, and my match was nowhere near my usual standards so I know it wasn't perfect
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PostSubject: Re: Vendetta #110 Grades   Vendetta #110 Grades EmptyWed Apr 29, 2015 2:48 pm

Your match was good, I just don't know how or why I lost. Funny

The grading literally does nothing to explain that. Aside from "You both had good posts but I liked this one more."

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PostSubject: Re: Vendetta #110 Grades   Vendetta #110 Grades EmptyWed Apr 29, 2015 2:57 pm

Honestly, if we're going to settle for gradings like that, we might as well literally just list who's won.

"Your match was good, as was your opponents, but you won!"

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PostSubject: Re: Vendetta #110 Grades   Vendetta #110 Grades EmptyWed Apr 29, 2015 3:01 pm

That's what happens when we have hardly anyone who actually wants to grade.

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PostSubject: Re: Vendetta #110 Grades   Vendetta #110 Grades EmptyWed Apr 29, 2015 3:17 pm

Did you ask me Snoopz? DID YOU?
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PostSubject: Re: Vendetta #110 Grades   Vendetta #110 Grades EmptyWed Apr 29, 2015 3:21 pm

Can Dante grade it? >_>

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PostSubject: Re: Vendetta #110 Grades   Vendetta #110 Grades EmptyWed Apr 29, 2015 3:28 pm

If Dante can, please

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PostSubject: Re: Vendetta #110 Grades   Vendetta #110 Grades EmptyWed Apr 29, 2015 4:28 pm

Dante I give you permission to vote on it.
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PostSubject: Re: Vendetta #110 Grades   Vendetta #110 Grades EmptyWed Apr 29, 2015 8:17 pm

I never said I'd do it. Just wanted you to ask.
























































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PostSubject: Re: Vendetta #110 Grades   Vendetta #110 Grades EmptyWed Apr 29, 2015 10:42 pm

Sunami: Your description is as good as I expected it to be. The use of different words and terms really make the whole post flow much better and helps the reader visualize the match more vividly, preventing it from being a play by play. Really, your use of figures of speech is something I envy, it makes it much more exciting. Your portrayal of both characters was good, and the fans cheering on Bradley made sense due to Razor pretty much being the biggest cuntface in canon. Your selling is great, but it doesn't impede the action and flow if the match. You could have described Razor hoisting up Bradley for the Razor's edge more though, considering Bradley is 288lbs and Razor is 228lbs; you could have written him to have at least a bit of difficulty carrying the behemoth. Also, while your storytelling and characterization is good; I would've liked to see Bradley be as cocky as Razor was - They're both heels after all. Your use of moves really flow well. The ending wasn't as exciting as the rest of the match. A bit of a nitpick is that you used "Matthew" and "Bradley" too much later into the post in referring to your character; you could've used other nicknames lol. Overall a strong return coming from you.

Razor: Your description is also good, but it's not your best - it's inconsistent. Your use of succession of moves flow really well like Sunami's which is always good. I like that you wrote in how Bradley isn't a fan of submissions, as the grader shouldn't have both characters pages open while reading the post. The double boot spot was really cool to imagine, props to that. Your characterization of Razor was good, and Bradley's as the enduring rookie was too, but again I would've liked to see some ego on Bradley's part. Your ending was alright. Overall a good read, but it wasn't your best.

Verdict: Matthew Bradley wins. His description was consistent and really, really good. While your action was pretty equal, Sunami's way of writing just edged it out for me. His post was able to make me care about the match more than Razor's; and that's a big factor for me. Again, Razor's post looked a bit rushed and I know he can do better. Sunami, keep it up - you're a really good writer.
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PostSubject: Re: Vendetta #110 Grades   Vendetta #110 Grades EmptyWed Apr 29, 2015 10:47 pm

Much better.

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PostSubject: Re: Vendetta #110 Grades   Vendetta #110 Grades EmptyWed Apr 29, 2015 11:43 pm

Yeah That Razor needs more words to explain his shittiness.
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PostSubject: Re: Vendetta #110 Grades   Vendetta #110 Grades EmptyThu Apr 30, 2015 5:14 am

And the streak lives yesssssss
Really enjoyed this match tbf, it's the first non-stip I've had in forever
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