JOKER TeamJoker
Posts : 1189 Join date : 2013-07-21 Age : 34
| Subject: Vendetta #65 Grades Sun Nov 17, 2013 7:06 pm | |
| Dwight Lights vs Riley Williamson vs Xtreme Icon Grader: Razor
Dwight Lights – Great intro. Some of the wording made it a bit weird for me to read, had to go over it a few times to understand, but good technical from all three, plus it led into some good spots like Dwight shoulder-blocking Icon by ducking Riley. Also, lol @ Dennis’ Blades of Glory reference. Good leap into it with the Suicide Dive + Corkscrew lead up. Your description could use some work, but I realize you didn’t bother too much with it because you weren’t in a big match. Though certain things I had trouble reading, I really enjoyed how you wrote certain things out. Interesting ending as well. I mean, it was normal, finisher-end, triple threat so it’s more like “finisher – finisher – end”, but you had the quick scene with the EMTs and Icon being hospitalized. Wonder what this will lead to.
Riley Williamson – Interesting start, not the regular “all three men at once” start, but instead one man attacks another. Fairly good description; nothing special, but you don’t always need that. Thought it was a big weird to get a 2 count a few seconds into the match, but having Dwight pull him off made sense. Good technicality from what I am reading thus far. Reading on into it, I notice a lot of good technicality. Every man has gotten some of action. Great move on the “Dwight stomps the ropes, breaking the hold” part, creative. Enjoyed reading the basis of the swaton bomb thing. Not a huge fan of your ending. It seemed very rushed, you kinda just jumped into that. It was creative, it just was poorly written and it seemed rush. Overall, fairly solid match.
Icon – Dude, whatever it is you’re going through, know what we are all here for you. I won’t grade because it’s not necessary since it’s obvious you didn’t win.
Verdict: I have to give it to Dwight Lights. Riley. You put up an excellent match, but that wasn’t good enough to match Dwight’s. Keep it up this way Riley, you are definitely becoming better and better.
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JOKER TeamJoker
Posts : 1189 Join date : 2013-07-21 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Vendetta #65 Grades Sun Nov 17, 2013 7:07 pm | |
| TK vs Drake Dysfunction Grader: None
TK wins by way of no show. I don't know what is up with Nate, he hasn't mentioned anything to us. Hopefully he hasn't left us. Thanks for the effort though Ruro!
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JOKER TeamJoker
Posts : 1189 Join date : 2013-07-21 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Vendetta #65 Grades Sun Nov 17, 2013 7:08 pm | |
| JHac vs Whisper Grader: None
JHalc wins this one, despite the short effort. No word on what is going on with Whisper either.
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JOKER TeamJoker
Posts : 1189 Join date : 2013-07-21 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Vendetta #65 Grades Sun Nov 17, 2013 7:09 pm | |
| Tyler Lawson vs Ace Andrews Grader: None
Tyler Lawson gets the win via no show. I would like to point out, and say thank you, because you knew early in the week that Ace was probably going to no show, and you still put forth an entire match as if you were going to go head to head in a main event match.
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JOKER TeamJoker
Posts : 1189 Join date : 2013-07-21 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Vendetta #65 Grades Sun Nov 17, 2013 7:10 pm | |
| Caleb Spires vs Razor Xtreme Grader: None
Razor posted a short something after Caleb announced that he was done, with the exception of XM. Thank chicken for showing Razor!
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