Verdict: This was actually a very close match, but I am sure that both of you knew that coming into this match. You don't usually see a 2,000 word match go face to face with a 6,000 word match and expect much, except in this case, it does have an effect. Riley, 6,000 words isn't bad or anything, but this is a show opening match. Even then, it would be believable if it were a match between two established stars. Riley is fairly there, but this is Luis's second legit match, it doesn't make much sense for him to be in a very long match in the opening bout. It doesn't seem all that realistic. Nonetheless, aside from the word count, you both put in a lot of effort quality wise as well. I saw lots of great moves in both matches, and more importantly, lots of great storytelling. I honestly have no complaints about either match. Snoopz, your ending was fairly simple, but as it regards to the match, it was good in that sense. Riley, your writing is definitely improving. I didn't have much trouble reading through it like I used to, it seemed straight up. There are a few things here and there that I was a bit confused on, but all in all, I have no complaints. You put up a solid effort and have nothing to be ashamed of. If this were a bigger match, it'd make a little more sense, but it was good nonetheless. Once again, you have nothing to be ashamed of, and you should bring this effort into your title match. You will have a very big chance of winning. Nonetheless, all that said, I think it's obvious that the verdict goes to Luis Claudio

C5 Ion: While reading the beginning of your match, I found it interesting that you had Ion hit Walter with a Superkick so early in the matchup. One thing I would suggest to you is that next time when ever you are in a Triple Threat Match, be sure to describe where your opponents are located. (IE. C5 Ion looks to his left and sees Dereck staring him down while across the ring, Paddy watches the two men whilst, there eyes are locked toward each other) This would give the reader/ grader a better visual understanding to see what is going on. I've also notice in your match that there are some grammar errors. Usually, grammar doesn't count in terms of grading as it is only the match but next time, be sure to reread your work and go over it to make sure that it sounds good. Also, another thing I would suggest on for you to become a greater E-Fedder that you already are, is that work on Description moves. For example, "Ion charges and hits a running forearm, followed by a series of forearms in the corner. Ion then picks Perry off of the corner and then places Perry's head inbetween his legs, Ion then lifts him up and then scores with a Powerbomb. Driving Paddy down into the centre of the ring" -Do this, and you will be alright. gjOtherwise, your match was good. There was alot of action going on between all Three men and no one was left out, the finish was neither rushed, nor bad. But it was good enough to finish off the match.

Perry: Starting off while reading your match, it would be easy to understand why Ion and Dereck would team up to jump on Perry, since he is the only heel in the matchup. XDA sentence down and I read this, "At this point Ion stomps down hard and suplexes the larger tag champion stiffly; a textbook snap suplex."- I thought David Micheal's & JHalc were the Tag Champs. I-DBut all jokes aside, overall, your match has been good so far. alot of action going on between all three men. I've also notice that you have took my advice that I gave you last time I graded your match gjThe finish was nothing pretty, but it was done well. Paddy knocking Dereck over and then hitting his Finisher on Ion to get the clean 1 2 3 was written well, but all in all, this was a very good post by you. Short, but good.

Verdict: I'm gonna have to give the win to Paddy Perry His Post was done very well and I believe that he had a better post than Ion. Ion, I think some of the main GM's here have discussed about you needing to work on Description, and Transition. If you don't take there advice, you won't progress as a Efedder. Some advice I would give you is to read some some of the top level guys matches here. Read some of David, JHalc's, and Dominick's matches and this will help you progress in the fed. Trust me, I was just like you before, having difficulty on Description and and Transition, but I took some of there advice and it helped me become better. Do this man, and you will be good :)Perry, continue to improve, and I know you will be a major threat to JHalc's Title.

Jared no showed but explained with plenty of time to go he was going to no show.

Wolverina: Nice technical action to start the match, well-paced. "Momma Johnson didn't raise no fool though" I don't know why, but I really liked that line. XDNice way to end the paragraph, pretty good description and nice way to justify you not selling it. Your writing and describing is pretty good, and I like how you're selling Wolfie's back. Would be better if you named your spots, makes the match more clear. Again, good selling and description… That ended quickly lol. It was good for its amount but you know it could have had more. Good match though.

Nicole Johnson: Nice psychology to start off the match. Your writing has improved greatly since when I last saw it. Again, like Wolverina, nice technical start to your match, though I would've liked to see more instead of just Collar and Elbows. Great description, though. Nice selling with the Knife Edge Chops. Nice spots leading up to the fourth paragraph. Great description, selling and entertainment throughout the match, and the ending spot was pretty good.

Verdict: This is going to Nicole Johnson. I think she just bested out Wolverina in everything. Good match ladies.

D-Volution: Very strong early on; character reaffirmation to go along with some basic building blocks as far as in ring action goes. All in all a solid effort from you guys. The D-Volution brand was very thoroughly stated and you did make the Logging Crew look legitimate. I expected the traditional team needs a save situation that you see in tag team matches all the time, but it wasn't really here. I don't have an issue with you guys 'bending the rules,' but out-heeling heels seems sketchy - and would not to wonders for the Logging Crew as a brand.

Logging Crew: Interesting start. Nice chain wrestling. Weird spot having the ref missing the heel team's tag, but I like new things. We'll probably see this spot on TNA next week. Well, the three viewers will. Another quick observation would be that you either are a human thesaurus or you had one open while writing. There was a lot of really good action, moreso than your opponents so you have that going for you... but there was a lot of oddities too. The biting. The heels getting the face spot. The fire ball on Nova...

Verdict: D-Volution. The Logging Crew had more action, but I thought D-Volution's action was more thoughtful and more focused. I thought, in terms of description and flow, D-Volution was superior as well. The finishes were equally disappointing - although the fire ball spot was the closest thing I thought we got to a meaningful send off. I'm glad you both showed, and we've seen worse main events, but I was expecting better from both squads. All in all it was fairly close, honestly, and I don't think this loss does much to take the Logging Crew out of the title discussion, in kayfabe and in the booker's mind.