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PostSubject: Rev Wars 6/Saturday Nights Rage #2 Gradings   Rev Wars 6/Saturday Nights Rage #2 Gradings EmptySat Aug 09, 2014 9:30 am

Saturday Nights Rage Results



HARVEY JORDAN vs. JAMES CARLISLE
ONE ON ONE
GRADER: NONE


Harvey Jordan no showed this match, but James Carlisle did show. Congrats on the win, and if you'd like some feedback, feel free to contact one of the GM team.


CRYSTOV RAZETTI vs. DON LUCA CORELONE
ONE ON ONE
GRADER: NONE


There has been a bit of a mix up with the booking of this match, so I'm just going to strike this off the card. Apologies to both of you.


THE DRAVEN BROTHERS vs. THE LOGGING CREW
TAG TEAM MATCH
GRADER: NONE


Unfortunately, The Draven Brothers no showed, so the winner of this match is The Logging Crew. Congratulations on the win, and if you'd like some feedback for your match, don't hesitate to get in touch.


JAXSON PHOENIX vs. CARNAGE
ONE ON ONE
GRADER: NONE


Jaxson Phoenix has no showed, but Carnage did show up. Congrats to Carnage on the win, and if you'd like some feedback, feel free to ask.


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Revolutionary Wars 6 Results



EVAN FLARE vs. KAHLAN
NO DISQUALIFICATION MATCH
GRADER: NONE


Both Evan Flare and Kahlan no showed this match, so as far as the canon of the fed is concerned, this didn't happen due to Evan Flare locking himself in his car and Kahlan tripping over and falling into a pit seconds before their match.


THE ASYLUM vs. CULTURAL EXPERIENCE
TAG TEAM MATCH
GRADER: NONE


Both teams no showed, so this match is null and void.


DC HENNIG vs SPYRO
ONE ON ONE
GRADER: NONE


Spyro unfortunately no showed this match, so your winner by disqualification is DC Hennig, after Spyro refused to break his submission hold. Mick, if you would like some feedback for your match, don't hesitate to get in touch.


AZRAEL vs. JARED JERUSALEM
BARBED WIRE MASSACRE
GRADER: NONE


Decep has no showed this match, as he's really busy at the moment. Neither man in this match could continue, so this match will go to a no contest! (Frenchie wins.) Frenchie, if you'd like some feedback, just let us know.


EFFY vs. POLLY POCKET
LAST WOMAN STANDING MATCH
GRADER: NONE


Effy has no showed, so the winner of this match is Polly Pocket. Nicholas, if you'd like some feedback, you know where to find us. Smile


VLADIMIR STRIFE vs. MADDOX PAINE
STEEL CAGE MATCH
GRADER: NONE


This was a promo match, which saw Vladimir Strife defeat Eric Goodman in a brutal fashion while Maddox Paine watched. I'm really enjoying this feud, guys. Vlad, if you'd like some feedback for your post, feel free to get in touch.


ROB CHAPMAN vs. AKIRA KOBAYASHI vs. THE PIRATE
TRIPLE THREAT MATCH
XWA Intercontinental Title
GRADER: NONE


Both Akira and The Pirate no showed, so your winner and NEW! XWA Intercontinental Champion, Rob Chapman! Rob, if you'd like some feedback, get in touch.


TYSON SMITH vs. RILEY WILLIAMSON
XTREME RULES MATCH
XWA Hardcore Title
GRADER: KANI


TYSON SMITH: The first thing that stands out is the structure of your writing. It could do with just a little bit of a tune up, as I found you using a lot of commas where you could have broken the action up a bit and improved the flow. Despite the structural issues, I thought that the springboard moonsault into the counter and the following move was good, but it was a tad difficult to envision what you were going for with the fireman's carry into the torture rack. I can kind of see it, but it's a bit wordy and hard to follow. I think you should have made the light tube spot more of a big deal, really selling the brutal shot before the Shining Wizard. However, I do think that the description of the impact of the Shining Wizard was more like it. But, on the whole, your match would really benefit if you took a while to focus on selling. The action was good, though, and you managed to get an even spread between the two competitors, which was good to see. The Half Nelson Suplex on the outside was particularly brutal, I think, as well as the spot with the light tubes on the plywood board. There certainly wasn't a shortage of brutal moments in this match, to say the least, and you really used the stipulation to full effect. The finish was...well. Personally, I didn't like it, mainly because it followed the Powerbomb through the flaming table, and also, it's not really how I envisioned the match ending. I feel like sticking a firecracker in someone's arse isn't really the way any match should end, to be honest with you. I feel like this really let the match down.

RILEY WILLIAMSON: Your match started with some stuff I liked and other stuff I wasn't too crazy on. You had a fairly equal mix of good and not so good description and structure in the opening paragraph, but it wasn't anything that would strike me as being bad. Just maybe a little clumsy, is all. Your match was very verbose, but not too much. You spent a while going through the finer details, which is fine, but can sometimes seem a little bit overdone. You also had a few sentences that were a bit wonky as far as structure is concerned, and perhaps your selling can do with a bit of a tune up here and there. But it wasn't bad by any means. The action was pretty good, I thought it was good that you eased into the hardcore stuff with a bit of action in the ring, and some decent exchanges. Things spilled out to the outside of the ring, and you had some really good action here, even a little blood thrown in for good measure. It wasn't anything too crazy, but it was clear that things were starting to ramp up. I was a big fan of the Emerald Fusion from the top rope, too. Your match definitely picked up a lot from the early stuff, and you ended up writing some good stuff, with some nice hardcore moments throughout, particularly the Superkick onto the tacks, and in particular the ending was brutal. The barbed wire chair shots were really something that made me feel a little bit uncomfortable reading. Good match throughout, well written and with good action, despite the few issues throughout with structure and such.

VERDICT: I'm going to give this match to Riley Williamson, as I felt that all around he did better. That is not to say that Tyson turned in a bad match. There were just certain parts that let you down, but they will come with practice. Thank you both for showing, and congratulations Riley.


ROBERT HOPE vs. DANNY DIAMOND
ONE ON ONE
GRADER: NONE


I apologise for not showing for this match, Snoopz. Some stuff was going on. I'll make up for it at our rematch. If you'd like some feedback, just say so.


DAVID MICHAELS vs. HITMAN ALEX
ULTIMATE HELLRAZOR MATCH
XWA World Heavyweight Title
GRADER: NONE


Well then. Both Chilly and iLike no showed, and I know that iLike is wanting some time off. iLike has told me that he'd rather lose the title than vacate it, meaning that on Vendetta #87, we will be having a match for the World Championship!


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FINAL NOTE
Well then, folks. Not a great showing for this PPV, but I'd like to thank those who did show for their matches. Keep an eye on Vendetta for some interesting changes.
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