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Subject: Re: P6) Tucker Undernuts | "Untitled" Thu Mar 19, 2015 1:00 am
The fans are excited as the signs of excitement are on their faces, we go to the entrance, laughters go all over the place. "Tucker Undernutz bitchezzzz" blasts over the PA System. The old man Tucker Undernuts comes and he's not impressed at all, as two sad events happened last week at Vendetta 106.
Tucker Undernuts makes his way to the ring slowly, and asks to highlight what happened last week, we go into the big screen as we see Ryan Quill ruining Prince's own marriage, and then Prince Alex losing to Vertigo.
[Tucker] You see this bitch Ryan Quill, he came here on his freakin' debut and he ruined Prince Alex's own marriage, what a complete dick move this is man. Tonight, the whole world will see how a man called Prince Alex The Third will crush the skull of a party ruiner called Ryan Quill.
The fans are showing their disapproval for Tucker as he absolutely doesn't give a shit about what they are saying. [Tucker] And let us go to the newcomer Vertigo... *pauses* Vertigo, we appreciate you. You're a really badass guy and you deserved to win last week, you can really climb up the ranks and you proved yourself. And that's why we don't give a FUCK about you.
[Tucker] Let us go back to Ryan Quill, now you man, you're a coward. You think you're a man but you came sneaky peaky and attacked Prince Alex III.
[Tucker] And today, it is Prince... errr, I mean Brian Quill Vs Ryan Quill.
The fans are shocked as they want to see this Brian Quill guy. Tucker, laughs and points at the curtains.
Smoke and Mirrors hits the PA System as a little kid stands up to see who the Brian Quill guy is. [i]
[Little Kid] Look look daddy.
[i] A guy wearing a hoody and covering his face emerges from the curtains, under the hoody he's wearing a golden suit, and golden boots. Brian Quill is walking slowly. Before he reaches the ring, the little kid shouting gets his attention. He approaches him.
[Little Kid] H-h-hello.
[Brian Quill] Hello little kid.
[Little Kid] Who are you?
[Brian Quill] I'm Brian Quill, Ryan Quill's brother.
Brian rubs on the kid's hair and gets in the ring. The camera focuses back on the little kid.
[Little Kid] Daddy, this guy is Prince Alex, his voice is the same, isn't he?
[Daddy] He told you he's Brian Quill.
The cameras go back to the ring as Quill gets his hoody off. It appears to be....
He asks for a microphone.
[Brian Quill] YOU RUINED MY MARRIAGE!
[Brian Quill/PA3] I will be only today, Brian Quill.
[Brian/PA3] Today, I'm gonna screw you. I'm going to fuck you all over and this will be your last day, Ryan Quill.
The angry Prince Alex takes a long breath.
[PA3/Brian] I can't wait till I get my hands on you, asshole. Today I'm not going easy on you. I'm NOT GOING FUCKING EASY ON ANYONE!
[Tucker] Calm. You have to ca...
[PA3/Brian] I am NOT fucking calming down until I do the world a favor by getting rid of Quill and his ass.
[Tucker] Getting rid, you mean make him extinct? Like the... dinosaurs? He can extinct and go fight the dinosaurs. YAAAY.
[PA3/Brian] Ryan, I will waste many minutes of my life just to get the virus called you out of the XWA.
[Tucker] Is there a medicine for Ryan Quill, doctor?
[PA3/Brian] *nods* Yes, and it's called PRINCE... ALEX.... III.
Prince thrusts his elbow and a wave of golden sparks are in as he looks disgusted by the fans, we go back to the little kid.
[Little Kid] I told you it was Prince Alex dad.
[Daddy] You're right kid.
[Little Kid] Now give me 50 dollars.
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Subject: Re: P6) Tucker Undernuts | "Untitled" Thu Mar 19, 2015 1:37 am
An improvement from your last promo, lets just call it interesting.
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Subject: Re: P6) Tucker Undernuts | "Untitled" Thu Mar 19, 2015 8:38 am
Thanks. Feedback highly appreciated.
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Subject: Re: P6) Tucker Undernuts | "Untitled" Thu Mar 19, 2015 8:56 am
wat
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Subject: Re: P6) Tucker Undernuts | "Untitled" Thu Mar 19, 2015 10:27 am
What wat?
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Subject: Re: P6) Tucker Undernuts | "Untitled" Thu Mar 19, 2015 11:48 am
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Subject: Re: P6) Tucker Undernuts | "Untitled" Thu Mar 19, 2015 11:52 am
Now give me 50 dollars
Promo of the Night
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Subject: Re: P6) Tucker Undernuts | "Untitled" Thu Mar 19, 2015 11:57 am
I have no idea how the fuck to react to this.
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Subject: Re: P6) Tucker Undernuts | "Untitled" Thu Mar 19, 2015 11:59 am
Man I lied. Promo of the fucking century. This might be the most hilarious god damn thing I've ever read. Especially the part about Vertigo.
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It's a bit disjointed, but I'm glad you're having a go. Just work on fleshing certain parts out and trying to get a clear idea of what you want to say, and you'll be fine. Keep working on it.
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Subject: Re: P6) Tucker Undernuts | "Untitled" Sat Mar 21, 2015 9:16 am
Dude, on a serious note, ask someone before you decide to randomly be their character's brother lol. A lot of other fedder's would have been rather PO'd compared to Broski's reaction...
Subject: P6) Tucker Undernuts | "Untitled" 
Though I'm sorta confused haha. 
