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PostSubject: Re: Almandine Trek "Decisions"   Almandine Trek "Decisions" EmptyWed Aug 07, 2013 10:15 pm

After the segment of Dave Demento. The screen flashed to Almandine Trek backstage. Her theme music "To The End Of The Earth" played quietly in the background. As the camera panned out, it slowly revealed she was wearing a blue low front cut top and a pair of jeans, standing to her right was interviewer Brian Johnson. A huge smile on his face. Her body language showed she was less than impressed with him, the jokes off camera left an impact, but she smiled at the camera.

"I'm here with The Raining Beauty" Brian Johnson announced before saying her name "Almandine Trek"

"Thank you Brian" She nodded.

"Some of you may remember her from last year" He said, then added with a grin "Most of you won't"

She looked at him with a small smile but said nothing.

"Now tell me Almandime... What happened?"

"It wasn't my best performance. I let nerves get the better of me and thankfully i have a second chance to -"

"To do what exactly?"

"To prove that I am just as good as good as anyone here"

"That's quite a statement"

"It is. I've worked really hard the past year. To better myself and what I have to offer."

"And what do you have to offer?"

"You'll have to wait and see"

"I watched the tapes of you wrestling again, ready for the interview and if I wasn't impressed before, I'm sure the people at home feel the same" He chuckled to himself "What are you planning to do?

"I am more prepared and willing to do what needs to be done. I want to wrestle -"

"To wrestle, you have to have talent" He said.

"I could show you a demonstration?" She replied with a raised eyebrow.

"That won't be necessary" He replied nervously and glanced at his watch "And we're out of time -"

She reached over and grabbed the microphone, her hand grasping around his tightly, he was a little taken aback as she slowly pulled the mic over and held it to her lips. She smiled at him then looked at the camera.

"I've made decisions that weren't right for me. But I learnt from my mistakes. Whatever I decide to do next. Whatever happens. I will never stop doing what I love. I am The Raining Beauty. That might not mean something now, but it will"

She let Brian Johnson slowly take the microphone back, then pinched his cheek, which saw him make a painful face, before walking off.

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PostSubject: Re: Almandine Trek "Decisions"   Almandine Trek "Decisions" EmptyWed Aug 07, 2013 10:27 pm

I don\'t know
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PostSubject: Re: Almandine Trek "Decisions"   Almandine Trek "Decisions" EmptyMon Aug 12, 2013 2:45 am

This was a surprisingly good promo. The dialog was very efficient and the dynamic between Almandine and Brian was hilarious and extremely well done. I think it was probably missing about five seconds of dialog or a sentence or something. I think you built up the Brian character to be knocked down, but you could have done more with the build up... I wish there was one more interaction before Almandine put him in his place, but I'm just looking for things to criticize. Well done!
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PostSubject: Re: Almandine Trek "Decisions"   Almandine Trek "Decisions" EmptyMon Aug 12, 2013 4:00 am

You make a good point. There was a build up. I think him just being a little intimidated would have done it lol I could of had her slap him, but it didn't seem the face I'm portraying her as. But thanks for the feedback Smile
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