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 |  Subject: Revenge 8 Results! Mon Oct 07, 2013 3:17 pm | |
| XTREME WRESTLING ASSOCIATION PRESENTS....
REVENGE RESULTS
16th September 2013
Live From the FedExForum Arena in Memphis, Tennessee!
THEME: 'BLACKJACK' BY AIRBOURNE
Okay guys. I wanted to do a full results page for this, but my computer crashed twice when I was writing it. I've put new parts in my computer, so it should be fine, but I will get to doing the normal results next week.QUICK RESULTS
Main Event
Nick Zayvin defeated JHalc
Hardcore Match
Joe Tresda defeated Jeremy Paisley
Almadine Trek defeated Alex Madsen
Tristan Harley defeated Dave Demento
Triple Threat
Mark Frenzy defeated Leon Kano and Alexies Valance
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| | Subject: Re: Revenge 8 Results! Mon Oct 07, 2013 3:18 pm | |
| Graded ResultsMatch 01 - Leon Kano vs Mark Frenzy vs Alexies Valance Alexies Valence: You no-showed.  Leon Kano: Interesting story you have going on here. The description and the dialogue was very bare-bones and could be improved in the future. It was solid for debut piece. I'm hoping you add some secondary characters to add some drama and some description to your pieces. It was good for a debut but not very memorable for the long run. Mark Frenzy: This was really good. I do have a gripe though, you used the word "Mark" way too much. Replace "Mark" with "He" and it would be golden. You seem to have a good grasp on this whole roleplay hobby. The interaction with Leena was a very nice touch and I'm excited to see where you go with this. You could be dark horse to become champion soon. Winner: Mark Frenzy. His description, dialogue and interaction with Leena is what sold it for me. Leo will definitely become strong competition with some improvements in the future. Mark vs Nick seems to be a match in the future, and it should be good and competitive. |
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