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PostSubject: King of Xtreme 2014 / Saturday Night Rage #4 Gradings   King of Xtreme 2014 / Saturday Night Rage #4 Gradings EmptySat Nov 01, 2014 11:40 am

Saturday Nights Rage Results



BIG JIM VS. NICHOLAS CARLSON
SINGLES MATCH
GRADER: NONE


Big Jim wins via. No-Show.



E.G. DEAL VS. JAMES CARLISE
SINGLES MATCH
GRADER: NONE


Double no-show.



JUSTIN SAVIOR VS. JAKE EVANSTON
SINGLES MATCH
GRADER: NONE


Double no-show. Both are now removed from the active roster as they have both been inactive.

King of Xtreme 2014 Results



SHADE VS. JARED JERUSALEM VS. MARK STOREY VS. XTREME ICON VS. HITMAN ALEX VS. KASABIAN STALKER
SURVIVAL OF THE SICKEST; NUMBER ONE CONTENDERSHIP FOR THE INTERCONTINENTAL CHAMPIONSHIP
GRADER: RILEY


Jared Jerusalem: You did a good job with having both Ted and Joey go over the rules of the match. And you did well in implementing Icon's promo, (which was posted a little late but can be accepted as Icon explained due to him explaining in his post.) The way you started off the match was good. With Jared going after Mark who was trying to escape . While Shade and Stalker are doing the same thing and Hitman and Icon tying it up. You made everyone get involved and not just only write Jared and Mark doing one thing while the others are Idle. The Double Teamwork with Alex and Icon working together to take down Shade was brilliant. There were spots that used the Thumbtacks well. To which really helped you in terms of the Selling department. "The Butcher runs and dropkicks The Ultimate Synner’s knee before he could take notice. A bad move on the Pervert’s part. He may have taken Shade down a peg, but he lands his sides on the thumbtacks. The side of his arms, ribs, and thighs have tacks sticking out of them as blood trickles down." - Was a pretty sick spot for me. What makes me a bit confused was why would the Referee wave to the Crowd and tell them that it was a two count? Shouldn't he be telling or signaling to the Timekeeper that it was a Two count? The Finish, I was not a fan of. Why have someone else grab the Briefcase and not Jared? For a guy like Jared, I think he could have won without help...

Kasabian Stalker: Different to what Jared wrote in the beginning of his match, having all four of the Competitors close in on Kasabian, as he tries to get away from them but Shade and Jared catch him and double suplex him before they all jump on him again and start kicking him down was something I thought wouldn't happen. But you, having Ted and Joey talk about Kasabian and how he is fairly new to the scene is what created the Background to the match. We all knew that this wasn't going to last long, which you had the Crazy, drunk swinging cane hitting man known as Icon swing and hit his Kendo Stick to the mid section of Jared which caused all the chaos to start. Description wise, you did well you had numerous spots that were well written and The Powerbomb Turnbuckle spot was brutal to say the least. The flow of your match was clear throughout, not having drop once. And the Action was decent at best. The Finish was what really did a nice touch to such a wonderful match. With Icon's Injured foot being suck between the top and second rope. Kasabian climbs up the Cage Wall and moves across the wire to obtain the Briefcase. Was such a dirty but yet, clever way to end a chaotic match.

Verdict: I enjoyed reading both matches. Both had plentiful Action, and both were on point in terms of Selling. Both hitted on points that the other didn't. However, I found Kasabian Stalker's match to be the one that was better. His match just went above and had more creative style to it then Jared's. - Meaning, that he had some spots that were unoriginal and set the craze that was, or is, Survival of The Sickest. Not taking anything away from Jared, for he did do well, but Kasabian takes the win.



GENGHIS VAUGHN VS. RILEY WILLIAMSON
SINGLES MATCH
GRADER: NONE


This Match was a Promo Match



POLLY POCKET VS. NICOLE JOHNSON ©️
XWA WOMENS CHAMPIONSHIP ©️
GRADER: NONE


Nicole Johnson wins via. No-Show and is our last XWA Womens Champion as The Womens Championship is now Retired



RAZOR XTREME VS. DANNY DIAMOND ©️
XWA WORLD HEAVYWEIGHT CHAMPIONSHIP ©️
GRADER: VLAD


Razor Xtreme: Top notch use of both characters and how you built up the match. You and Danny are both just excellent at this every time. I love that the very beginning of the match kind of went over what the two have went through in the weeks leading up to it and really sold the rivalry. Razor was sneaky as always, Danny was a bit egoed and there was even mention there of the minute size difference between the two. I loved that Razor really targeted Danny's back in the early going and there was a part that really homed in on the technical capabilities of both stars that was golden. Your description was also really good. You made quite a few moves really easy to see in my head and the way they worked just had a really natural flow to it for the most part. Razor's attempted Bulldog into Danny dropping him onto the apron of the ring was one of these moments and it was just a brilliant spot. I loved it.

That said, I did find a few issues in the post. Selling was done great in the short term, but seemed a little absent in the long term. Other than the 9 count, there doesn't really seem to be any slowing or wearing down of the characters toward the end of the match from everything that has transpired. And, honestly, in general, the end of the match seemed to trail off from the great tone it began on. You start with an excellent pace and brilliant description that kind of trailed off as it went on. Due to this pace though, it came off as though you have this great buildup with a drawn out war between them, but then everything just suddenly goes to chaos almost. I'm not sure if perhaps you were a bit rushed in writing the second half, but it felt like it.

Danny Diamond: As I mentioned with Razor, both of you guys are just excellent at expressing who these characters are throughout your match and building the contest up with action that is just so fluid that it's practically like reading a write-up of an actual match. Razor and Danny both had egos well on display here, with Razor's underhandedness and sneaky ways playing into everything as well. You also made a small noting of the statistical difference between the men with their height, which I loved. The way in which Razor sees the opening when Danny's head hits the ground and just relentless pounces upon it was done to perfection. It really showed him as an opportunistic and vicious heel. Your selling is solid the whole way through, with both of them seeming to wear down very naturally as the match progresses and the pace slowing down a bit with that, many great references to how the attacks to the head plagued Danny through the contest.

Of course, I'm a bit obligated to point out some flaws here. Your description was quite good, but could use some more work. There are quite a few times where moves are practically called off without much detail given to them. I read through parts with the Lapelle(?) hold several times, twice in your post and once in Razor's and I have no fucking idea what it is. I don\'t know

Verdict: While both men did an excellent job, there were a few ways in which it wavered toward one or the others. Razor had better description in the moves in general, but Danny definitely did a better job in terms of selling in the long run of the match. That said, at the end of it all, I have to go with Danny Diamond. Razor's post, as I mentioned, did great with a slow pace at parts and great description, but this and then the real high paced way in which it turns toward the second half really hurt the overall flow of the match, opposite an excellent flow and pace in Danny's. Ultimately, in part because of this, Danny's post was just more entertaining.



AKIRA KOBAYASHI VS. VLADIMIR STRIFE ©️
XWA LIONHEART CHAMPIONSHIP ©️ ; KING OF XTREME FINALS ; I QUIT MATCH
GRADER: NONE


Vladimir Strife wins by No-Show, and is the 2014 King of Xtreme Winner.


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