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PostSubject: S13.) "Rise Of A Champion" | Tyson Smith   S13.) "Rise Of A Champion" | Tyson Smith EmptyMon Jun 02, 2014 5:02 am

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PostSubject: Re: S13.) "Rise Of A Champion" | Tyson Smith   S13.) "Rise Of A Champion" | Tyson Smith EmptyTue Jun 03, 2014 7:58 pm

OOC:Probably isn't my best work as I am still trying to iron out some kinks but it's a start.

The lights in the Arena go completely out, the effect causes a blanket of darkness to cover everyone inside the arena. A soft whistling sound like in a old wild west movie is heard, causing fans to reach for the cell phones to maybe get pics of someone sneaking in through the dark.

Joey Miles:What the fuck is going on? Who the fuck turned out the lights, and what is with this damn whistling...Shit like this drives me fuckin crazy.

Ted Cedar:Just chill partner, I am sure things will be ok. It looks like the fans are trying to see if anyone is sneaking in.

The soft whistling is soon replaced with the sound of a man laughing wickedly at the top of his lungs, followed by the titan tron bursting to life, it's screen a glowing white, as Last Saloon begins to play, the titan tron slowly dimming and revealing in all it's wonder the remains of a gladiator pit, bodies are seen strewn throughout, decapitated, mutilated, with what appears to be flies buzzing around some of the corpses, standing in the mist of all this is a short stocky person. On his back are various tattoos, some look like they represent family, others look like patches of honor, this unknown man reaches down, grabbing at his black leather jacket which was laying on the ground, he puts it on and walks towards the horizon.

Voice:Some men train for eons in order to achieve that peak, that top of the mountain that says you are the victor, you have become the Champion. Others Die and wither away trying to achieve that same quest or goal, and yet others  fail and quit, never realizing there full potential.

The scene opens up and you see the same man from before, only this time he appears to be in a ring, his black boots show BullDawg, his simple black double singlet exposing just his massive arms, as he flexes and bends, with what looks like a sparing partner. Muscles appear to bulge and pop without much effort from the thicker man, the sparring partner appears as a rag doll, as he takes the stiff onslaught of various punches, closelines, and other maneuvers,as he is being thrown around the ring, the scene ends with the sparring partner lifted up into the air, before being driven hard to the mat with a power slam, the impact causes the receiver to bounce off the ring mat several times, the scene goes black as again a voice comes across the speakers.

Voice:It is said, that men look for battle in order to prove there worth and value. Others do it, seeking a redemption from sins long committed, these sins something that can never be washed away. Still others, look to achieve total victory regardless of the cost.

The scene opens up and we find again the man again standing in a ring, this time there are 6 other silhouetted men and it appears to be a brawl. Sweat, possible blood, and maybe a tooth are seen flying here and there, but all through the action being shown, there is one man who appears to be in control, you watch as one guy is turned inside out from a vicious closeline, another guy is shown being lifted up high into the air, before coming down on the back of his head, neck, and back. The man with BullDawg on his boots continues to lay waste to those that are left standing in the ring. Finally a bell is heard ringing in the background, a man in a zebra shirt is shown raising the hand of the big bulky man, before 2 girls bring him a belt and put it around his waist. The scene fades to black as Last Saloon begins to play before a voice is one again heard.

Voice:You have been warned. Prepare XWA, for a new challenger is set to appear on the horizon, and when he comes, he promises to bring, mayhem, destruction, and a trail of bodies in his wake, as he rises to the top and claims XWA as his own.

The Arena lights come back on as the titan tron blacks out, the fans are heard whispering in hushed tones, trying to decide who or what this person is. The announcers are a bit taken back by what has taken place and they are seen shuffling papers as they get themselves in order.

Joey Miles:What the hell! What the hell is going on? I don't know who the fuck this new guy thinks he is or what he plans on accomplishing, but damn man, did he have to turn the fucken lights out. Stupid punk bastard! He is lucky he is not here or I would slap him so hard.

Ted Cedar:Well, I am intrigued by who this new guy is that has joined XWA, all we know from this video is the name BullDawg. From what clips and video was shown, this guy means business and doesn't play nice with others. And likes to leave mayhem and destruction in his wake...I look forward to seeing more competition join the ranks of XWA, it is what makes us the premier federation.
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PostSubject: Re: S13.) "Rise Of A Champion" | Tyson Smith   S13.) "Rise Of A Champion" | Tyson Smith EmptyWed Jun 04, 2014 8:50 am

Some tips: there are some words that are unnecessarily capitalized. And other parts need question marks and such. Also correct usage of "their" and not "there". But those things aside, it was a decent promo, just needs some improvement.
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PostSubject: Re: S13.) "Rise Of A Champion" | Tyson Smith   S13.) "Rise Of A Champion" | Tyson Smith EmptyThu Jun 05, 2014 1:07 pm

Pretty much what Myke said. Grammatically, it could use work, but it's not a bad promo.
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