Simple question, what aspect of eFedding do you feel you need to improve on?

For me, my main thing is descriptions. I see people like Kani, Rob and Mick with these amazing descriptions and try to model mine after their's, but I just can't seem to get it down. My descriptions are always the same basic stuff. They aren't bad, but they're far from great.

I could also be more consistent. I find myself lacking motivation a lot and writing bad matches because of it, like I did this week.

Variety in vocabulary. I always tend to describe things using the same words.

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That.

I've never been good with words, frankly, so I tend to repeat the same stuff over and over. It's irritated me for a number of years tbh.

Yeah, that's part of my descriptive problem.

Definitely that I need to find more time and inspiration on posts and lengthen them.

Willingness to use nicknames, because I know it reads better but it makes me feel stupid.

Starting sooner. >_>

Handling losses.

Fedding.

Oh boy. Description, selling, vocab, RUN ON SENTENCES DAMN IT, realism. Everything!

Consistency when writing matches. Some parts of my match I put real hard work into, and other parts of my match would feel rushed as hell.

My descriptions, selling and vocab for sure. Procrastinating on the match doesn't help either.

Nowhere

Consistency. I can be really good one month, then suck for a few weeks, then be decent, then good, then back to sucking. I don't have long-term consistency.

Dedication(a.k.a showing up) when I have my sporadic returns.

More work on description and entertainment of the match. I try to make it seem entertaining but sometimes I look back and it doesn't look that entertaining.

Caleb wrote:

Dedication(a.k.a showing up) when I have my sporadic returns.

This.

Toning down the description.
I've read my matches and thought I was a pedantic prick afterwards.

Entertainment too I suppose.

Procrastinating. I fall into this sad routine where I put off writing until the last couple of days, then spend a huge block of time writing, which in turn makes me not want to write for days, and the process keeps repeating itself.

Promos. I think I'm still stuck in 2010 writing mode when it comes to promos. I'd like to do some characterization through promos and build some matches and programs, but I know I'll put too much attention into it and lack on the actual graded match. Hopefully I can break myself and learn to write shorter, simpler segments.

^ I've always loved your promos.

Yeah, Procrastination and Consistency. I know I'm a good writer, but I always leave it til the last minute.

I can't seem to nail an entertaining promo anymore, NOBODY READS THEM!!!

I tend to go apeshit with my running on sentences, and even after six years I never took Snoopz advice and worked on my structure.

The game is over, someone just hasn't told the player yet. Don't cry for me... I'm already dead.