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PostSubject: Archived Vendetta Match Discussions   Archived Vendetta Match Discussions EmptyMon Aug 12, 2013 1:03 am

Discuss matches that have been archived here.

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PostSubject: Re: Archived Vendetta Match Discussions   Archived Vendetta Match Discussions EmptyMon Aug 12, 2013 1:07 am

As awful as Meastro's match was, and hopefully he will improve, his after match was so damn entertaining and I laughed pretty hard Funny

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PostSubject: Re: Archived Vendetta Match Discussions   Archived Vendetta Match Discussions EmptyMon Aug 12, 2013 1:09 am

I lol'd. Jeeze... A robot as a manager is awesome.

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PostSubject: Re: Archived Vendetta Match Discussions   Archived Vendetta Match Discussions EmptyTue Aug 13, 2013 2:38 pm

I can not stop laughing. Funny I can picture that irl, not in a wrestling company, but in like a robot chicken segment.

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PostSubject: Re: Archived Vendetta Match Discussions   Archived Vendetta Match Discussions EmptyTue Aug 13, 2013 2:59 pm

^ or Celebrity Deathmatch if anyone remembers that. Funny
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PostSubject: Re: Archived Vendetta Match Discussions   Archived Vendetta Match Discussions EmptyTue Aug 13, 2013 3:33 pm

^OF COURSE.

That shit was epic back in the day.

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PostSubject: Re: Archived Vendetta Match Discussions   Archived Vendetta Match Discussions EmptyTue Aug 13, 2013 3:35 pm

Yeah that as well Funny

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PostSubject: Re: Archived Vendetta Match Discussions   Archived Vendetta Match Discussions EmptyTue Aug 13, 2013 7:47 pm

@Caleb wrote:
As awful as Meastro's match was, and hopefully he will improve, his after match was so damn entertaining and I laughed pretty hard Funny

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I laughed pretty hard as well.
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PostSubject: Re: Archived Vendetta Match Discussions   Archived Vendetta Match Discussions EmptyWed Aug 14, 2013 5:20 am

I'd like to suggest all the match threads be linked to the grading threads, because it might be tricky to navigate in the future even if all the threads remain in order. It's a lot of work I guess, however.

Just a suggestion Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Archived Vendetta Match Discussions   Archived Vendetta Match Discussions EmptyWed Aug 14, 2013 9:25 pm

I had already thought of that. They're linked to the show threads instead. Funny

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PostSubject: Re: Archived Vendetta Match Discussions   Archived Vendetta Match Discussions EmptyThu Aug 15, 2013 4:13 am

They are? I never noticed lol.
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PostSubject: Re: Archived Vendetta Match Discussions   Archived Vendetta Match Discussions EmptyMon Aug 26, 2013 3:58 pm

Akira vs. Scott St. Vincent

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You started off the match with some chain wrestling which was nice to see. I don't have any complaints about the moves you choose, but I do think you were a little too ambiguous with your descriptions. There seemed to be a lot, especially early, left up for the reader to decipher, such as the following:

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making Akira miss the kick. Scott takes advantage of the situation to grab Akira's body from behind and pull him to the ground
I've got a fairly good idea of what you meant but it's better not to leave that sort of thing up to the imagination. More effort in descriptions could really go a long way for you.

I thought you did a good job of building action up toward the finish. I don't like the idea of Scott missing the same move three times, but I don't have a big gripe with it either. The biggest areas for improvement would be characterization and description.

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PostSubject: Re: Archived Vendetta Match Discussions   Archived Vendetta Match Discussions EmptyMon Aug 26, 2013 4:34 pm

Thanks for that Ian. It's been a VERY long time since my last match, so I liked how this one went out. Of course I need some improvement again, but it's nice to know the points I need to get better at. ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Archived Vendetta Match Discussions   Archived Vendetta Match Discussions EmptySun Mar 08, 2015 6:17 pm

So my match was pretty awful and I've improved now, look at me now I'm a 2 time XWAB Hardcore Champ, and one time UWF tag team champ!
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PostSubject: Re: Archived Vendetta Match Discussions   Archived Vendetta Match Discussions EmptyTue Apr 14, 2015 9:01 am

Be honest... I don't stand a chance against Razor with my running sentences. I'm on a roll though.
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PostSubject: Re: Archived Vendetta Match Discussions   Archived Vendetta Match Discussions EmptyTue Apr 14, 2015 9:24 am

I'm being honest when I say you're going to be the next world champ! WOO
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PostSubject: Re: Archived Vendetta Match Discussions   Archived Vendetta Match Discussions EmptyTue Apr 14, 2015 11:08 am

Anyone mind having a quick scan of my match post, and let me know if it's any good? Not looking for any great detail, bullet points would be fine.
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PostSubject: Re: Archived Vendetta Match Discussions   Archived Vendetta Match Discussions EmptyTue Apr 14, 2015 8:06 pm

I'll be viewing it.
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PostSubject: Re: Archived Vendetta Match Discussions   Archived Vendetta Match Discussions EmptyWed Apr 15, 2015 7:34 am

So uhhh... I could have wrote a full match post just then. Ah well...
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PostSubject: Re: Archived Vendetta Match Discussions   Archived Vendetta Match Discussions EmptyWed Apr 15, 2015 11:11 am

Mink wrote:
Anyone mind having a quick scan of my match post, and let me know if it's any good? Not looking for any great detail, bullet points would be fine.

Did you gain any feed back? If not, I'll read it after work today and tell you my thoughts on it.
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PostSubject: Re: Archived Vendetta Match Discussions   Archived Vendetta Match Discussions EmptyWed Apr 15, 2015 11:15 am

FUCK YOU JOHN CENA wrote:
Mink wrote:
Anyone mind having a quick scan of my match post, and let me know if it's any good? Not looking for any great detail, bullet points would be fine.

Did you gain any feed back? If not, I'll read it after work today and tell you my thoughts on it.

Myke sent me a message on Facebook to say that he'd give me some feedback, so it's cool.

Although if you really want to... >_>
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